I'm really confused by your first piece. I don't under stand the elbow that is sticking out randomly between them and where it is supposed to be coming from and why it's there. I also like the connection to the background in the middle of the two figures. You could possibly use that in the upper half of the piece? But I don't think it's completely necessary. I like how you didn't take the American flag literally when you depicted it in the second piece.
You should know how hard it is to be creative anymore...it seems like anything we do has already been done. But you seem to truly have this unique style and approach to things that gives you an edge. Your pieces are really sweet. I never though a brownish red cardboard color could look so good with faded primary colors. Keep experimenting.
yoo. soo. these are lookin real nice. i like how you drew the people in the first one. but i feel like its lacking somethign. maybe a background. im not one to talk about that though. the american flag is sick also. maybe add more color too it? idk. i relaly like the black in the back. you did those in the others from last month but i think it works real well
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I'm really confused by your first piece. I don't under stand the elbow that is sticking out randomly between them and where it is supposed to be coming from and why it's there. I also like the connection to the background in the middle of the two figures. You could possibly use that in the upper half of the piece? But I don't think it's completely necessary. I like how you didn't take the American flag literally when you depicted it in the second piece.
You should know how hard it is to be creative anymore...it seems like anything we do has already been done. But you seem to truly have this unique style and approach to things that gives you an edge. Your pieces are really sweet. I never though a brownish red cardboard color could look so good with faded primary colors. Keep experimenting.
yoo. soo. these are lookin real nice. i like how you drew the people in the first one. but i feel like its lacking somethign. maybe a background. im not one to talk about that though. the american flag is sick also. maybe add more color too it? idk. i relaly like the black in the back. you did those in the others from last month but i think it works real well
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